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		<title>Comment on The hardest thing I ever wrote by Mary Ann Peden-Coviello</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mary Ann Peden-Coviello</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 26 May 2011 00:52:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Of course, we&#039;re gonna be disappointed to have to wait. You wouldn&#039;t want us to be yelling, &quot;Oh, yay! A delay!&quot; (Oh, a rhyme.) But we&#039;re adults (well, most of us, sort of) and we&#039;ll wait semi-patiently and we&#039;ll cheer like crazy when Elliot strolls onstage for real.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Of course, we&#8217;re gonna be disappointed to have to wait. You wouldn&#8217;t want us to be yelling, &#8220;Oh, yay! A delay!&#8221; (Oh, a rhyme.) But we&#8217;re adults (well, most of us, sort of) and we&#8217;ll wait semi-patiently and we&#8217;ll cheer like crazy when Elliot strolls onstage for real.</p>
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		<title>Comment on The hardest thing I ever wrote by Adi</title>
		<link>http://darknesspd.com/the-hardest-thing-i-ever-wrote/#comment-27</link>
		<dc:creator>Adi</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 May 2011 23:39:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Adi huh?
Isn&#039;t that the name of the character in the script you consulted on for me?
Seriously Kai, you&#039;re a brilliant writer.  So, people have to wait a few months for the book.  And so, you&#039;er going to be tapping your little foot impatiently till it all happens.  And so, you&#039;re a bit upset about it.  It&#039;s all YOU.  And I think it&#039;s the right choice for the record.  That dissertation is going to be amazing - the bit you shared just made me...shiver.

Adi...lol</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Adi huh?<br />
Isn&#8217;t that the name of the character in the script you consulted on for me?<br />
Seriously Kai, you&#8217;re a brilliant writer.  So, people have to wait a few months for the book.  And so, you&#8217;er going to be tapping your little foot impatiently till it all happens.  And so, you&#8217;re a bit upset about it.  It&#8217;s all YOU.  And I think it&#8217;s the right choice for the record.  That dissertation is going to be amazing &#8211; the bit you shared just made me&#8230;shiver.</p>
<p>Adi&#8230;lol</p>
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		<title>Comment on The hardest thing I ever wrote by D Kai Wilson-Viola</title>
		<link>http://darknesspd.com/the-hardest-thing-i-ever-wrote/#comment-26</link>
		<dc:creator>D Kai Wilson-Viola</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 May 2011 23:34:53 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Yeah, I know the feeling re:groups.  I work full time as a copywriter for another company as well, because it&#039;s how I afford to write fiction, and that&#039;s been busy, and there&#039;s been everything else that&#039;s been going on lately, and y&#039;know, if it was all running even with just a very few bumps, I&#039;d be fine, but it&#039;s not and I&#039;m tired and I need to call time. The book *can* wait - my dissertation can&#039;t.  Everythinggn else...I dunno, I&#039;ll scale it.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Yeah, I know the feeling re:groups.  I work full time as a copywriter for another company as well, because it&#8217;s how I afford to write fiction, and that&#8217;s been busy, and there&#8217;s been everything else that&#8217;s been going on lately, and y&#8217;know, if it was all running even with just a very few bumps, I&#8217;d be fine, but it&#8217;s not and I&#8217;m tired and I need to call time. The book *can* wait &#8211; my dissertation can&#8217;t.  Everythinggn else&#8230;I dunno, I&#8217;ll scale it.</p>
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		<title>Comment on The hardest thing I ever wrote by Valerie Douglas</title>
		<link>http://darknesspd.com/the-hardest-thing-i-ever-wrote/#comment-25</link>
		<dc:creator>Valerie Douglas</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 May 2011 23:25:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>There&#039;s these two projects I&#039;m involved in, and then suddenly I got involved in this group, I love everyone in it, but wow it suddenly took over my life. In the meantime, Ash - sweet wounded Ash - has been begging me to go back to his story. I&#039;ve been putting it off, because the edit was so mean I couldn&#039;t bear to look at it, but Ash&#039;s story is part of a series I used to love.
So yeah, I get it. It&#039;s just tough sometimes. I&#039;m working on editing Ash&#039;s story even as we speak, even though Convocation needs to be finished. *grins* It&#039;s what we do, try to balance the insanity that is the glorious act of writing...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>There&#8217;s these two projects I&#8217;m involved in, and then suddenly I got involved in this group, I love everyone in it, but wow it suddenly took over my life. In the meantime, Ash &#8211; sweet wounded Ash &#8211; has been begging me to go back to his story. I&#8217;ve been putting it off, because the edit was so mean I couldn&#8217;t bear to look at it, but Ash&#8217;s story is part of a series I used to love.<br />
So yeah, I get it. It&#8217;s just tough sometimes. I&#8217;m working on editing Ash&#8217;s story even as we speak, even though Convocation needs to be finished. *grins* It&#8217;s what we do, try to balance the insanity that is the glorious act of writing&#8230;</p>
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		<title>Comment on Taking the hint&#8230;. by Wayne Stewart</title>
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		<dc:creator>Wayne Stewart</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 25 Apr 2011 14:25:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>As per the prior reply, I couldn&#039;t agree more. It took me over seven years of researching, writing, editing, re-researching, rewriting, and re-editing my book called Soul Trap. I had to put my own time into it at my own speed because every editor I ran up against wanted to not just correct for grammar and whatnot, but subtly coheres my writing style. My book is about new and revolutionary discoveries in the Bible found lurking just below the conscious reading level. To change my style was to change my book. So, in the end, I did it myself: all 20 chapters and 225 pages. It was tedious and time consuming, but I managed to pull it off. Renee Barratt just finished my cover. I am now looking to publish it as an ebook.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>As per the prior reply, I couldn&#8217;t agree more. It took me over seven years of researching, writing, editing, re-researching, rewriting, and re-editing my book called Soul Trap. I had to put my own time into it at my own speed because every editor I ran up against wanted to not just correct for grammar and whatnot, but subtly coheres my writing style. My book is about new and revolutionary discoveries in the Bible found lurking just below the conscious reading level. To change my style was to change my book. So, in the end, I did it myself: all 20 chapters and 225 pages. It was tedious and time consuming, but I managed to pull it off. Renee Barratt just finished my cover. I am now looking to publish it as an ebook.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Taking the hint&#8230;. by Mary Ann Peden-Coviello</title>
		<link>http://darknesspd.com/taking-the-hint/#comment-12</link>
		<dc:creator>Mary Ann Peden-Coviello</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 19 Apr 2011 22:38:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Finding a compatible editor can be a major undertaking. The writer and the editor have to sort of think alike -- have at least a common view of the way a story or novel should hang together. If they don&#039;t, it can be trouble. I don&#039;t know (obviously) what kind of differences you had with your editor, but I know you&#039;ll get the fixes made.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Finding a compatible editor can be a major undertaking. The writer and the editor have to sort of think alike &#8212; have at least a common view of the way a story or novel should hang together. If they don&#8217;t, it can be trouble. I don&#8217;t know (obviously) what kind of differences you had with your editor, but I know you&#8217;ll get the fixes made.</p>
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		<title>Comment on The cover is here! by D Kai Wilson-Viola</title>
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		<dc:creator>D Kai Wilson-Viola</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Apr 2011 22:33:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>LOL...I&#039;m sure you could call it a research and consultation trip so probably ;)
It&#039;s beautiful over here - part of the reason I&#039;m so keen to write books is because I want to make sure we never have to leave :D</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>LOL&#8230;I&#8217;m sure you could call it a research and consultation trip so probably <img src='http://darknesspd.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' /><br />
It&#8217;s beautiful over here &#8211; part of the reason I&#8217;m so keen to write books is because I want to make sure we never have to leave <img src='http://darknesspd.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif' alt=':D' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>Comment on Glass Block by Introducing a couple of characters &#124; darknesspd.com</title>
		<link>http://darknesspd.com/the-books/the-deadly-series/glass-block/#comment-5</link>
		<dc:creator>Introducing a couple of characters &#124; darknesspd.com</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Apr 2011 22:13:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<title>Comment on The cover is here! by Renee - The Cover Counts</title>
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		<dc:creator>Renee - The Cover Counts</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 07 Apr 2011 03:30:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Kai, 

I&#039;m thrilled that you like it so much!
it&#039;s been an absolute pleasure working with you and I look forward to a long friendship! 

Can&#039;t wait for the release date. Think I could call it a taxt deduction to come over there and celebrate with you? LOL!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Kai, </p>
<p>I&#8217;m thrilled that you like it so much!<br />
it&#8217;s been an absolute pleasure working with you and I look forward to a long friendship! </p>
<p>Can&#8217;t wait for the release date. Think I could call it a taxt deduction to come over there and celebrate with you? LOL!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Case file 90124-Bc/x &#8211; part 1 by Jenn</title>
		<link>http://darknesspd.com/case-file-90124-bcx-part-1/#comment-2</link>
		<dc:creator>Jenn</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 05 Apr 2011 22:36:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Omigosh omigosh omgosh - wanna read this so bad!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Omigosh omigosh omgosh &#8211; wanna read this so bad!</p>
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